“It’s humanity, my Lord!
Was it, in its nature to decay?”
The angel shifted with unease,
Worried, what God might have to say.
It was Man’s fault, this time as well,
Like a zillion times before.
He let go of humanity, & thence it got lost
In the wilderness, went astray, obscure.
Without the flimsy Human shell,
Where surprisingly it sought abode,
Humanity- God’s greatest, most precious gift,
Withered away, shrivelled to its core.
“Hmm, if Man thinks he can live without it,
Then let it be that way!
And we shall see,” said God,
“For how long in his obnoxiousness, he can stay.
As for humanity, my Angel!
I’ll recreate it once more,
And pour it in the hearts of Men,
With more humble souls, for sure.”
Perplexed, the Angel looked God’s way,
God smiled and said,”Yes! there are more to come.”
©2012. Habiba Danyal
This post was in response to Trifecta’s Week 29th challenge. This week’s one-word prompt was “Decay”.
DECAY (intransitive verb)
2: to decrease usually gradually in size, quantity, activity, or force
3: to fall into ruin
I read a quote a long time back which was something like “Every new child born in this world proves that Allah has not lost faith in Humanity” What a lovely poem Masha Allah.. hope to read more from you
Thank you for the kind words, good madam.
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Ooh, very captivating! Your words are so powerful. Love the last line!
thank you julia! 🙂
You are not only an awesome writer, but a super cool poet too 😀
I am so proud 😀
am I?? 😀 But I dint win 😦
Thanks for linking up this week to Trifecta. My favorite line was “It was man’s fault this time as well.” Nice job with the prompt. Hope to see you back again soon.
sure, i will.
The bestest piece of ur beautiful writing so far.
See, dint i tell u dt u were capabale of much more. u seem to be proving it now.
im so proud of you 🙂
ty sinistodark! 😉
Thank you for stopping by my blog! Nice use of the prompt in this poem. This is a lovely line: “And pour it in the hearts of Men, With more humble souls, for sure.”
thanks christine! good luck with the competition 😉
Nice 🙂
thanks dew.:-)
Beautifully haunting piece.
thank you! 🙂
He let go of humanity and then it got lost – powerful line. Lovely.
Thanks kelly! 🙂
the hope you added at end is very very welcome. beautiful poem my friend.
thank you sharmishtha! 🙂
Humanity is in a sad state, but I like the hope of your poem when He recreates humanity and pours it into the hearts of men.
thank you Janna! hope is what keeps us alive. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by.
Intriguing, the thought of the humanity decaying while the humans remain. It’s a hopeful thought that there are still more to come, though.
thank you annabelle! 🙂 yes, hopefully, there are more to come.
Ah humanity… They say world still exists ‘cos of those whose hearts beat for humanity.. And I like the way you say that more are yet to come 🙂 Amen..
thank you asifa! Yes, i believe more are yet to come or else there wouldnt hav been any reason for the universe to keep existing.