Far at the seams of the horizon
where the sky dips down to kiss the earth
their union so clear yet so obscure
both coalesced, merged
sewn neatly together as one
yet separated
each sustaining its identity
their love such, that once
men feared to cross their union
feared it was the end of both
the earth and the sky
what they knew not was
love doth not build, no boundaries
love doth not know, no ends
it goes on and on
like the never ending junction of the sky
with the earth
and after every ardent kiss they share
the throngs of passion they build
weaving the veil of darkness, overnight
when spent, contended
the sky calls up the sun
to spill some light
and bathe the earth with beauty
the photons cling to her mane of green
and the silk of her blue
the sky glows, proud of her
and falls in love
yet once again
♣
And when men stride down
the face of the earth
smearing blood over her lush
mane of green
staining her smooth silken blue
strewing the stretch of her dignity
with undignified flesh
they call upon themselves the wrath
the curse of the sky, her lover
the sky summons the storm
to wash off all the filth
preserving the purity of his love
and once again
to sooth the wounded, bleeding earth
sun, the heart of the sky
pours down its love
and lulls her back to peace
free from the grime, the intruders
their union sparkles, clearly interlaced
after the storm resides.
©2012. Habiba Danyal
thing of beauty joy forever
Delicious, just gorgeous. The message is beautiful, and the way you wrote this is colorful and gentle.
First time coming by, happy to have seen some of your blog.
Thanks for reading! 🙂
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Thankyou so much aymen! 🙂
Finally a piece dt deserves all da stars.I was keenly waiting for this day.LOved da poem ❤
Hah! knew you would like it missy. you of all the ppl. 😉
Breath taking poem… splendid imagination… the words paint pictures of a beautiful love story of the nature 🙂 the fury over environmental degradation is just as passionate as the love for nature
Thankyou Asifa! 🙂
Awesome!
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nice blog visiting ur blog 1st time inspire me alot the way u write is complety remarkable the passion of ur imagination is very deep n outstanding the whole picture of what u imagine clearly clearify an image
nice job
thank u!
Wow! Such beautiful words and imagery!
you are always so encouraging, thank u S!
I am taken aback at the beauty of this poem. I read it three times and it really is touching. Thank you so much for sharing.
Thank you for appreciating Denise. 🙂
Vivid imagery, gorgeous setting! I liked how the mood was set for this poem!
Thanku Tayyaba 🙂
aww.. beautifully written! 🙂
🙂
just loved this amazing poem habiba. its so very beautiful.
Thank you Sharmishtha. 🙂
This is breathtakingly gorgeuous poetry Habiba! Loved the metaphor of earth and sky to have used to describe true love….it’s brilliant.
For now, it becomes my fav poem on your blog.
Gorgeous beyond words- “Far at the seams of the horizon where the sky dips down to kiss the earth…their union so clear yet so obscure..”
I can’t point out fav stanzas or lines here….it wud be too unfair on the poem. Each line stands out glowing with a beautiful light.
“The sun never says to the earth- you owe me. Look at what happens to a love like that. It lights up the whole sky!”
Thank you so much Suraiya. To be honest I didnt know by whom this verse was, I searched. Thanks for introducing me to Hafez. 🙂
My pleasure..! Yeah…even i had forgotten by whom it was …just remembered the lines i had read…and was too tired to google. 🙂
Now, that u mentioned it…i remember. You may love poems of Khalil Gibran too…his philosophy in the poems are amazing!
I do! Love his poetry, I mean. 🙂
loved the first stanza!
Thank you!
This is so very deep. You did a beautiful job with the first stanza. I am awed, I swear.
Ty fanfrend. 😉