‘tis a fort, this world
And we its weight
Some on two,
Or sprawled on fours
While some ne’er rise
Burdening it more
As on their bellies
Flat they lie
Searching for…..what?
©2013. Habiba Danyal
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very meaningful in few words 🙂
Thank u dear. 🙂
True. Really. Makes me wonder
Well-deserved win on Trifecta. Congratulations, Habiba 🙂
Thanks a ton Rashmi! 🙂
Beautiful, pondering piece. Congrats!
Thank you!
Perplexing, bewildering. I like it!
I loved the words used..looking for freedom perhaps? Simply wonderful.
Ah, that was a deliciously philosophical take in the prompt. Good work indeed!
Love the idea of being the weight of the world. Nice one.
Vey nice I loved this!
They do seem to be searching for something. This is good.
Katie atBankerchick Scratchings
I really like this!
So many symbolic parallels came to mind reading this, great take on the visual!
Very nice
it does make you wonder why and for what they search. 🙂
And what is it they are searching for.. I like it…xx
This is cool. I wonder if they’re all searching for the same thing…